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Today I got some helpful advice about my writing: ADD EMOTION.  Yes, it was all caps.  This has been difficult for me since I am not overly emotional.  Because I don’t see the value as clearly as most others would, it’s tricky to convey my character’s emotions.  Now that I know what at least one of the problems is, hopefully I can keep at it and progress.

In other news, I finished the rough draft of the second character’s outline.  Francis Holt the 2nd is an adolescent in the capital city of Etaren.  This time around, when I was making the outline, I tried to embed some emotions there as well.  One of the challenges now is to keep these characters original, and not let them act like other literary figures they resemble.

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